The only difference is that I’m laughing and after I realise that this is my reflect.
Everyone has his problems
I don’t
That’s because you’re Brian. And so’s your wife!
I like this one chris. I know you probably hate hearing this, but I think this one could work with the last panel cut out, and might stick a little better. Make it seem a BIT more subtle, and a bit more smarty (I know you wanted to show off that they’re the same people better), but it’s not a huge deal. I’m sure it’s also a pain in the ass deciding what panels get cut and stay anyway, so I HOPE I’M NOT AN ASSHOLE FOR SAYING IT
It was still a cute and funny comic and you guys are all great and deserve kisses.
Asshole
No, butt. The clue is in the name.
It wasn’t a roll call but thank you.
Hey This guy isn’t the real Milan I would never say the ”A” word. Damn you impostor.
Ah, that’s an interesting take. I usually try to err on the side of clarity because the internet, but I like your take : )
I think adding the last panel kind of adds to it in a way. Showing the extent of his narcissism rather than it just being casual.
I personnaly think that adding the last panel make a total of four panels. Showing that the 4th panel is the final one of this comic.
I think swapping panels 3 & 4 would bring out the subtlety Panel 3 being the big reveal ‘n’ all.
Or, maybe panel 3 should have the left side cropped off to hide the billboard, but not the shortened hedge, with the guy saying beautiful with the Panel 4 pose, then Panel 4 being an uncropped Panel 3.
Looking at the comment section, I see everybody’s a comedian.
Well, I’ll be the bigger man, refrain from making a criticism & instead thank Chris & the rest of the Toonhole crew for all the free amazing comics they provide us with.
Even if they can’t draw a proper tree.
It’s not a tree, it’s a hedge!
They couldn’t use hedge-trimmers to trim a tree and end up with a result like that. The tree trunk would get in the way!
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It’s me in my room with my mirror.
The only difference is that I’m laughing and after I realise that this is my reflect.
Everyone has his problems
I don’t
That’s because you’re Brian. And so’s your wife!
I like this one chris. I know you probably hate hearing this, but I think this one could work with the last panel cut out, and might stick a little better. Make it seem a BIT more subtle, and a bit more smarty (I know you wanted to show off that they’re the same people better), but it’s not a huge deal. I’m sure it’s also a pain in the ass deciding what panels get cut and stay anyway, so I HOPE I’M NOT AN ASSHOLE FOR SAYING IT
It was still a cute and funny comic and you guys are all great and deserve kisses.
Asshole
No, butt. The clue is in the name.
It wasn’t a roll call but thank you.
Hey This guy isn’t the real Milan I would never say the ”A” word. Damn you impostor.
Ah, that’s an interesting take. I usually try to err on the side of clarity because the internet, but I like your take : )
I think adding the last panel kind of adds to it in a way. Showing the extent of his narcissism rather than it just being casual.
I personnaly think that adding the last panel make a total of four panels. Showing that the 4th panel is the final one of this comic.
I think swapping panels 3 & 4 would bring out the subtlety Panel 3 being the big reveal ‘n’ all.
Or, maybe panel 3 should have the left side cropped off to hide the billboard, but not the shortened hedge, with the guy saying beautiful with the Panel 4 pose, then Panel 4 being an uncropped Panel 3.
Looking at the comment section, I see everybody’s a comedian.
Well, I’ll be the bigger man, refrain from making a criticism & instead thank Chris & the rest of the Toonhole crew for all the free amazing comics they provide us with.
Even if they can’t draw a proper tree.
It’s not a tree, it’s a hedge!
They couldn’t use hedge-trimmers to trim a tree and end up with a result like that. The tree trunk would get in the way!